Forever Yours: Reviewed

Yahoo! Forever Yours gets reviewed. It's always nice to hear, or in this case, read, what other people think about Forever Yours. Being a first time novelist, the gushier the review the better. But on the flip side, coming from a scientific background, I crave all the details, especially when parts of the story would benefit from a bit of clarification.

For me, writing is just like bench work. I'm always searching for that better word, a tighter plot, well rounded characters. Elizabeth, in her review is correct is stating Jeff is not well explained. Thankfully, with his roll in the sequel, With A Little Help From My Friends, his home life and background are laid out in the first few pages. He's the poor little rich kid, whose father only speaks when the law needs to laid down.

No worries, Jeff, the Cahills live right down the street and you are always welcome to dine at their table.

Elizabeth, thanks for the review.