Monday, November 13, 2006

Poetry Thursday

(A few days early...)

Love, a jagged deception
beared potential, but
was awashed in delusion.
A distorted and distant reality; dogged dreams
nurtured with piercing criticism.
Be warned, I've broken out. I know the lies.
Your woven web thickened
with missed steps and half truths,
does not behold me anymore.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Whoa! Intriguing.
A love of your youth???

GTS said...

Absolutely amazing! Especially the last line.

Giggles said...

Well done,this is one of the first lies I thought of too! You nailed it....excellent!

Peace and giggles